Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Blog 9 - The Beast ... is Real

Today I woke up uncertain of what the day's events would be. I finally saw Ralph. Ralph and I were trying to light the fire that burned out overnight. Suddenly Ralph brought up Jack's party.

"What happened to.. You know."

"I was on the outside" I said.

"Me too." Said Ralph.

I was ashamed to admit to Ralph that I ....murdered Simon.

"It was his fault" I said while I shuddered.

"He shouldn't have crawled out of nowhere like that." I gesticulated while I talked.

"He shouldn't have came." I moved my hands downwards.

In the end we decided we were never there and that It was Simon's fault.

Samneric came out of the forest with wood. They also denied the fact they were ever there.

The four of us tried to start a fire.

"The wood is in the wrong position"

"We will need to stifle it and start a new fire."

Ralph grabbed a big leaf and covered the fire. We started a new fire.

The little flame turned into a huge fire.

As we watched the fire we heard a noise in the bushes.

"It's...... the beastie!!!!"

We all attacked something. I felt something near my face. My asmar came. I struggled to breathe. My lungs were quenched and sufficated.

I heard to voices struggling with each other. A loud uluation came from one of them.

Finally, Ralph and samneric come. Sam was smothered in blood. I asked what happened. They talked about how they beat up the beast. Turns out it was them fighting each other.

They seemed phosphorescent in my eyesight. Suddenly, I realized my specs were gone, and it wasn't the beast.

3 comments:

Emma Christenfeld said...

William-
I like the way that you end with "Suddenly, I realized my specs were gone, and it wasn't the beast." It never says that Jack attacked but it implies it and it is much stronger this way. The blog is a little short though. Can you go into more details about it?
-Emma

William said...

Emma, I added a little more to the end about the situation. Hope it helps!

Ernesto said...

Something i notice is that you basically re-tell the chapter, but not give the characters opinions. Don't be afraid to make Piggy sound biased, don't be you be Piggy.
But otherwise it was great.